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    精彩极了和糟糕透了

        每每想起这件小事,我都会想到这样的同一个标题。
        今天早晨起床从前高中的语文老师就发来短信问我:你妈妈昨天上班了吗?上了。她脸上有斑点吗?恩有的。哦。那我昨天应该是遇见她了,她身上找不到你的影子,对于你的缔造者造出你这样的孩子是件挺奇怪的事!其实我妈妈不是看上去那么平淡,她很喜欢开玩笑,也很感性,只是他们这代人不善于把感情外露,不像我们那么张扬。噢,原来这样啊!
        这些对话让我想起小时候的事。
        小学四年级以前我是个很糟糕的学生,我一直觉得自己挺笨的,没有一门功课是值得我炫耀的,每门都很平平。我是老师眼中可有可无的学生。以前很害怕写作文,妈妈总在一旁鼓励我。她说写作文不用害怕,写作文是很容易的事。她经常帮我找写作素材。有一次学校布置作业,描写一个小动物。那时只有二年级,写作上还没有太多的要求。我独立得完成了那篇文章,我用了拟人的手法,我写了一只猴子洗脸,照镜子……写完候我兴奋地拿给爸爸看,爸爸说:看看你写的什么东西啊!猴子还会自己洗脸还照镜子?(其实爸爸是对于写作缺少慧根的人,但小时候总把大人说的话奉为真理)被他这样一奚落我也泄了气。像我这样的孩子本来就很少有自信,好不容易膨胀起来一点点也给挤扁了,我又回到自己从前那个谨小慎微的世界中去。
        等妈妈回来了,我觉得还有一线生机,我把文章给她看。她看完后先是锁住眉头,然后问我:这是你自己写的吗?是!不是模仿作文书写的吗?不是!哦!写的太好了,真没想到二年级能写出这么生动的文章!!
        从那以后老师对我作文的评价我不会那么在意了,虽然没有很高的分数,但是我开始觉得写作文不是一件难事。并且开始喜欢写。四年级我的成绩开始全面提高,可以排在班级前5名了,作文也受到了一位伯乐老师的欣赏。
        现在来说我仍然保持着写写文章的习惯,力求保证文章能够阐述一些哲理的原则。在写作上也算有一些小小的成就。我想这一切·都源于妈妈不断的鼓励,也源于爸爸的批评,使我时刻认清自己。

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    SONG CHENwrote:
    写得很好 吴导 ~~~  继续写下去一定将压倒韩寒郭敬明
    呵呵
    Aug. 15
    Joy Cheungwrote:
    這篇文章依舊很生動,看來的確得益于你媽媽的鼓勵~我已經開始幻想你小時候的樣子了~XD
    July 31
    ANNK SU.wrote:
    你丫现在开始写小智慧文了
    很有意思
    我小时候 完全是自己鼓励自己
    July 30
    apple applewrote:
    很好笑俄~~
    July 30
    你的写作在我心里一直觉得很好啊!
    July 30

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